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Band 2.5

Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely
belived
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believed
 that everyone should have
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access
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 to
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clean
water
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nomatter
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no matter
 where you live
without
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 any cost. I agree that everyone in the world should have
an
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access
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 to clean
water
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, but I
paritally
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partially
 disagree
with
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that
should
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it should
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be
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be free.
This
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 essay will discuss both views and explain the reasons for my opinions.
Firstly
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, the
reserches
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research
 shows that the infant death rate has
been
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decreased since most
of
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the
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countries started to have
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access
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the
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clean
water
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. It is
ciritical
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critical
 for humans to have
water
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 for living
and
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, and
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 the
water
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 is
essencial
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essential
 to keep us alive. There is no doubt that
anyone
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 should have
be
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 provided
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to
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access to
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access
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water
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.
On the other hand
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, it's impossible to provide the
water
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 supply for free, because you can not
access
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to
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the
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clean
water
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 from
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nature. It needs to be cleaned and
sanitized
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sanitised
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, and it needs to be
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access
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 through the
water
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 pipes. They required the
mainta
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maintenance
 nace and cleaning
and
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, and
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 they will cost
man power
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 and money. I strongly believe the ideal situation is free of charge, but it will be just impossible. In
,
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 conclusion,
while
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 both sides have valid arguments, I believe that we should have
water
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 anytime with some cost.

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structure
Plan your essay before you write. State your view clearly in the first line.
structure
Keep one main idea in each paragraph.
language
Check spell and fix big mistakes that hide your meaning.
language
Use simple link words like and, but, so, yet, then to show change in ideas.
task
Be clear about your view and keep it to the end.
content
Give one or two clear reasons with a short example.
content
You talk about why water is needed and you give a view at the end.
structure
The topic is clear and you try to give both sides.
language
You use some good phrases to show contrast.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic
  • human
  • right
  • water
  • supply
  • provided
  • free
  • charge
  • agree
  • disagree
  • health
  • essential
  • sick
  • diseases
  • supports
  • education
  • children
  • focus
  • learning
  • searching
  • better
  • futures
  • reduce
  • poverty
  • families
  • save
  • money
  • spend
  • important
  • needs
  • promote
  • equality
  • chance
  • access
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