The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the contributions of three fields: agriculture,

industry

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, and services

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India's gross domestic product over 4 decades.

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, it can be observed that there is a huge gap between the sectors. The

industry

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section has been in decline with a drop of 50% in 2000,

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the services proportion has been steadily increasing. Taking a closer look, in 1960,

industry

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reached over 60% which is six times the other sectors, indicating that it was a primary part of the gross.

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, over the years, the percentage has been decreasing, achieving the lowest rate ever, roughly around 13%.

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, the services showed an upward trend, with a dramatic boost it outnumbered the other by 2000. Regarding the

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, it was consistent during the period, though it was always the lowest among others, in 200 it overcame agriculture with a ratio of 35 to 12%.

jana.ab.albader

Nov 10, 2025

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