Your childhood friend has established his own business. He needs a partner whom he can completely trust and asks you to become his partner. Write a letter to him. In your letter: • Give the details about your knowledge in this particular field and your opinion; • Tell your decision and its reasons; • Thank him for trust and offer. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

Dear Aman, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am writing

this

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letter to show my gratitude for asking me

becoming

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to become

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business

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partner with you. As you already know, I have a keen interest in terms of cooking, and I

also

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joined international branches to improve my cooking skills. Now, I know how to cook different

type

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types

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of cuisines, desserts, and many other international dishes as well. It will prove beneficial for your

business

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as well. As you want to open a restaurant for local people, and your idea is

prove

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proving

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extremely

benefical

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beneficial

, because

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apply

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we already know the preferences

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apply

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and tastes of

local

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the local

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population. The reason

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apply

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I want to become your

business

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partner is that we know each other very well. So, it will be easy for us to grow our

business

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together, and I

also

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want to spend time with

family

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my family

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. Again, thanks for asking, and showing trust

into

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me to become

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business

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a business

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partner. See you soon, Harjeet Kaur.

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Nov 11, 2025

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improvement

Be clear about your choice. state yes or no to the partnership in a simple line.

structure

Put one main idea in each part. Keep ideas in order and use short lines.

content

Add a short plan or next step, like when you can meet to talk more.

tone

Polite tone and thanks to your friend.

content

You show your skill in cooking and how it can help the business.

structure

The opening and closing are formal and fit the letter style.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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trust
success
experience
skills
opinion
partnership
excited
commitment
reasons
shared
memories
opportunity
support
potential
entrepreneurial
knowledge
field
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