One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the population density is

incresing

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increasing

Therefore

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, governments

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are

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building more and more satisfactory housing

but

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, but

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environment protecting

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environmental protection

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problem

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problems

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will

worsing

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worsen

. In my opinion, both environment and housing are

improtant

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important

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, we need to keep

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this

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these

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two

side

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sides

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balance

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in balance

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Firstly

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, as we

konw

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know

housing

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, housing

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more hard

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harder

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today. The population density is rising. More and more people need

house

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a house

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to live

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in.

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, because of the limited land problem, the cost of housing is high. Many

house

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houses

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are very expensive,

exspecially

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especially

in Hong Kong. To fix

this

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problem, governments need to build more homes in cities using smart and tell design.

Also

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, governments should use empty and old land first because we need to keep green spaces like parks, and save energy and water. It is

improtant

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important

to protect

treesand

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trees and

nature.

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State a clear view in the intro and restate it in the end.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

130 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housing
home
people
city
land
build
plan
cost
jobs
nature
environment
green
water
air
soil
park
trees
forest
river
transport
bus
train
road
walk
cycle
design
idea
problem
solution
policy
rule
law
government
country
region
local
community
grow
demand
supply
protect
energy
safe
health
future
balance
risk
benefit
example
lesson
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