The diagram below shows the fire exit plan in a college accommodation.

The diagram below shows the fire exit plan in a college accommodation.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the fire exit plan in a college accommodation.
The diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan for a college accommodation building.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there are 7
bedrooms
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and 2 meeting points to
exit
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safety
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through 2 main staircases.
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with, the corridor is located among the seven rooms and the 4, 5 and 6
bedrooms
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are placed on the right side,
while
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bedrooms
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1, 2,
3
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and 3
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,
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are on the left side . The lift and one staircase are situated near
the
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apply
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rooms 4 and 5
and
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, and
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another staircase is placed above the bedroom 1 and Meeting
point
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1.The second meeting
point
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was found on the upper right corner of the plan. When it comes to fire emergencies, the residents are instructed to leave their rooms and should leave
with
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through
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the nearest
exit
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. The people who live in 1, 2, and 3
bedrooms
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should
exit
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in
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at
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the first meeting
point
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through the west side of
stairs
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the stairs
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.
Then
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residents in 4, 5 , 6 and 7
bedrooms
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should
exit
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along the right staircase near the lift and get to the Meeting
Point
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2.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bedrooms, exit, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • plan
  • exit
  • door
  • stairs
  • floor
  • room
  • sign
  • alarm
  • fire
  • safety
  • route
  • read
  • guide
  • move
  • walk
  • run
  • stay
  • calm
  • follow
  • instruction
  • emergency
  • drill
  • staff
  • student
  • college
  • accommodation
  • map
  • assembly point
  • muster point
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