The diagram below shows fire exit plan in a college

The diagram below shows fire exit plan in a college
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows fire exit plan in a college
The layout shows a fire exit plan
student
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residents.
Overall
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, the building contains seven
bedrooms
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connected by a large corridor,
along with
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two
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staircases leading to separate meeting points. There are three
bedrooms
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located on the northern side and another three on the southern side,
while
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one additional bedroom is placed on the eastern part of the building between
two
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rooms. In the middle of the accommodation, there is a spacious corridor that connects all the rooms, and an elevator is situated beneath the northern staircase. The first meeting
point
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is positioned on the western side of the map,
whereas
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the second meeting
point
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lies between
two
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bedrooms
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in the northern area. In the event of a fire, residents from
bedrooms
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one,
two
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, and three should use the corridor to reach the first exit
point
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,
while
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those from
bedrooms
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four, five, six, and seven are required to move along the passage near the elevator and go upstairs to reach the second
meeting
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exit
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point
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safely

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bedrooms, two, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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