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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Part 1 Answer

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Part 1 Answer
​The pie chart illustrates the data
of
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different
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the different
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 kinds of
location
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locations
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 of
dance
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grade
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grades
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in a town in Australia. These
dance
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students
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' classes are distributed on the basis of age group in the bar graph. ​As the information is gathered from a pie chart, the mostly young people have private studios with 48 per cent. In
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, only 10% college-based studios are used for disco grades. Public and community halls for
dance
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 classes are
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 eighteen per cent. ​The Bar graph demonstrates that especially, under eleven-year-old
pupils
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 are having training in Ballet.
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, the
students
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 aged 11 to 16 are attending the same class.
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, it is shown that mostly
pupils
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 of groups eleven to sixteen are participating in Modern
dance
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 training , and there are a total of 520
students
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.
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 300
pupils
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 are just taking the same class. ​The most interesting point is
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that approximately
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 the same number of
students
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present
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are present
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 in the tap class. Under 11
students
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 are four hundred fifty , and the other group
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pupils
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of pupils
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are
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is
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 four hundred thirty.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, students, pupils with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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