The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
This
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bar chart compares the percentage of drivers in seven different categories, divided by gender.
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, most women in teaching had their own
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, and most men in construction did so.
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, the same number of both genders in the journalism division drove
cars
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. First of all, 90 per cent of female teachers owned their
cars
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,
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the proportion of males was only 10%. Those figures showed one of the largest gaps between women and men, and the women's percentage exceeded the men's
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.
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, a similar trend was in the construction industry, where males'
cars
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shared 90%, but 10% females had private vehicles.
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led to another dramatic difference between both genders, followed by the
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section. In the journalism section,
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, there was the same fraction of
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owners, which accounted for half of the total, respectively.
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, advertising and law represented small differences in sex, which were about 10%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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