The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995

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of

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in Someland in 1945 and

1995

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respectively . As for the comparison of the

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between different years, the statistic of no schooling and

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women

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's highest

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was at 35%

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in 1945

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's highest

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came to15% in 1945. On the

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of year 12

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's highest

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was counted as 4% in 1945 . 1995 later , it almost slumped by a factor of 2 to %. When it comes to the

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of year 9, it arrived at 10% in 1945.

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1995, it approximately equalled

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's highest

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appeared around 1% in 1945. By 1995 , it had remained unchanged

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