computers are an essential feature of modern education. some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. others, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate.

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technology, some individuals feel that some particular subjects, like mathematics, need to be taught through
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others believe that other aspects of schooling which students can't learn properly
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everything is based on technology, it is
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it can be influential to be taught and learnt in an accurate way.
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the teacher is teaching.
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in specific areas or families.
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more than real and present teachers, it will reduce students' attention and they may be
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online activities more than the studies that they need to do. In conclusion, it is
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education system and a society facilitated with the knowledge of
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modern technology. Alongside all the benefits we mentioned
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drawbacks which
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pupils from having access to
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Task response
Make your position clear in the first paragraph and keep it to the end.
Coherence
Link ideas with simple words like and, but, so to help the reader follow your thinking.
Language
Explain each point with one clear example and check basic spelling and grammar.
Structure
There is a clear plan with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
Content
You discuss both sides and give some example ideas.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • computer
  • education
  • math
  • subject
  • teach
  • learn
  • teacher
  • student
  • class
  • classroom
  • use
  • help
  • good
  • bad
  • fast
  • slow
  • time
  • task
  • idea
  • point
  • test
  • quiz
  • study
  • group
  • talk
  • listen
  • read
  • write
  • practice
  • answer
  • problem
  • solution
  • online
  • offline
  • easy
  • hard
  • share
  • note
  • work
  • plan
  • need
  • should
  • can
  • may
  • done
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