The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now

The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now
The maps below give information about how the
layout
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of the bookstore has changed from the year 2000 to the present .
Overall
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, the main change was in the middle of the map,
while
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other layouts changed their placement. In 2000, the entrance was from the west
side
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of the map. There is a travel path after entering to bookstore, and there are two similar layouts , Fiction at the top and on the east
side
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.
Additionally
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, there is a service desk on the corner of the west
side
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and near it is a new book arrangement. Close to there was a non-fiction
layout
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which was related to the bookstore. At the final, there were three plans
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Art, Hobbies, and Cookery. At present, the entrance
side
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has no change and from there is a travel section that
also
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stayed with no change. On the north, there was a fiction , and now it has been added to other layouts too. Near that , the fiction replaced the non-fiction
layout
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.
Additionally
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, on the corner
side
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, there was a service desk that
also
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stayed with no changes and close to there is a New
layout
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Cafe. At the final step, the middle replaced three tables.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally, also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words layout, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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