The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.
The tables provide data regarding the population across three years: 1800, 1900, and 2000, in New York, with more details of the numbers of each district. The values were recorded in both percentage and the number of
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, it can be observed that the total number of residents has increased dramatically over the years, from thousands to millions, with a ratio of 79,216 to 8,009,185. Taking a closer look at Manhattan, even though in 1800, it was the largest contributor to the total population with 76% around 60,515 people, it dropped to 19% in 2000, yet the number increased, reaching 1,538,096.
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Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island, outnumber Manhattan
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approximately triple. They used to have only around 19 thousand in 1800 and continued to rise, recording 1,587,109 by 1900, and 6,471,089 in 2000. The pattern shows that the other districts became more focused on increasing their size.

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