The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about that place what suggestions you would like to make why you are offering these suggestions.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to provide you

some

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with some

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suggestions about a program that

your

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you

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have

decide

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decided

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to broadcast on

the

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apply

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television. I would like to suggest

about

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apply

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a Kufri city

that is

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situated in the

nothern

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northern

side of India. Two years ago, I visited Shimla

for spending

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to spend

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summer

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my summer

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vocation

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vacation

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along with

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my friends. I got to know about the Kufri from residents. It is

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ideal thing if you telecast the lives of people who live in

the

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apply

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Kufri. It is a great idea if you do short interviews

from

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with

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locals.

Moreover

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brodcasting

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broadcasting

on TV about their culture, traditions, and food can help to make people aware

about

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the place around the world.

However

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, new infrastructure is needed,

such

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as public toilets, proper roads, and

seconday

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secondary

schools. I would like to suggest

about

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apply

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it for various reasons.

Firstly

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, it is a remote and beautiful area, and your show would help to attract

vast

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a vast

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number of tourists

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the city. It is useful for locals to earn enough from it.

Secondly

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, the government is paying less

attractions

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attention

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about

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the place, but your program can force the high authorities to build new infrastructures. I am looking forward to your positive consideration.

yours

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Yours

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lovingly, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Nov 17, 2025

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task response

Make the aim clear in the opening and end with a short summary to show your request.

coherence

Keep one main idea in each paragraph to help flow.

grammar

Fix small spelling and grammar errors to raise accuracy.

content

You show you know the place from personal visit.

content

You give ideas for what to show and who to talk to.

tone

You try to be polite and helpful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

place
city
town
coast
lake
river
mountain
old
new
people
local
visit
show
plan
idea
simple
easy
good
best
talk
interview
story
food
culture
life
work
time
day
night
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sound
image
film
season
budget
help
guest
teacher
shop
market
school
family
safe
respect
local guide
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