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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe printed materials should only be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people strongly believe that online reading materials are the best tool for a
child
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 learning to read. They argue that these digital tools are very engaging for young minds. Online books often have interactive features, fun animations, and audio pronunciations that can make learning more like a game.
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 can help keep a
child
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 interested and motivated.
On the other hand
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, many people feel that only traditional printed materials should be used. They worry that screens can be distracting and hard on a
child
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's eyes. They
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 say that a physical book is easier to focus on, as it helps children concentrate on the words without any pop-ups or buttons to click. Holding a book can
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 create a special and calm reading routine. In my opinion, both types of reading have their own unique benefits In my opinion, both types of reading have their own unique benefits.
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, a balanced approach is the most effective solution. Using printed books can develop a
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's focus and a love for reading,
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 online materials can add excitement and interactivity to the learning process. Using both can help a
child
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 develop a wide range of reading skills.

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structure
Start with a short intro that says what you will talk about.
content
Give one clear point for online and one for print, then say your view.
coherence
Use linking words to tie ideas, like 'also', 'but', 'however'.
conclusion
End with a simple conclusion that repeats your view.
content
Shows balance between online and print.
stance
Your own view is clear.
content
Some reason are given to support both sides.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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