Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him to a party at your home and include the following What teh party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accomodate her

Dear Tina, I hope you are doing well . I just wanted to write a quick letter to invite you to the upcoming Christmas party on December 24th. It will be a small party at 5:30-11:30PM with my family and a few friends. We will have dinner

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traditional Vietnamese dishes.

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will be karaoke and dancing, after that will be a random gift selection,... lots of interesting things that I think you will enjoy. As you know, my home address is, after getting off the airport, just take Uber for about 10 minutes towards the mountain. I will book a hotel 2 minutes walk from my house, it is convenient for you to travel and shop, the room is clean and nice, and near the bus station. If you have about 3 days. We will plan the trip to Alberta that we discussed a long time ago, and the weather is great now. Please let me know if you require any

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information. I am sure you will have a great time. Hope to see you soon! Best wishes, Leah

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Nov 21, 2025

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clarity

Some parts are not clear. Give clear steps for how Tina can get to your home, and state the date, time, and place in a simple way.

structure

Try to keep one idea per paragraph. Put the party note in one part, the places to stay in another, and the travel notes in a third.

tone

Friendly tone and a polite close.

content

The note shows care by inviting and planning.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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