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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).
The diagram describes the steps of a wasteful process which becomes an organic fertiliser.
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, the main feature is the components added to the plastic container that have specific holes for air. It is observed that the waste , which happens to be an important factor, is combined with different materials,
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 as food, grass and newspaper. In order to realise
this
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 fertiliser, there are two ingredients which make the whole process happen.
Moreover
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, these elements may be the most essential because Nitrogen and hot water create
this
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 compost .
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, the next step which without, the experiment will not happen, is the time spent in heat in order to establish the reaction between the elements.
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, the compost can be used only after 6 months when all the ingredients are now ready. Another thing about
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 whole process is the difference between the first step and the
last
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 because we now understand what life might have been like in the past for those people who were passionate about agriculture.

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