The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The pie charts illustrate key information about the proportion of housing owned and rented in the United Kingdom in 1991 and 2007. The units are measured in
percentage
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.
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, it can be clearly seen from
pie
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the pie
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charts that there are four parts of
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percentage
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the percentage
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include
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:
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including
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home owner, social renting, private renting and social housing. The total
of
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number of
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homes was 22 million
homes
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in 1991,
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in 2007, it was 27 million
homes
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. Looking at the details, we can notice that the greatest
percentage
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was
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homeowners
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in both years at 60 % and 70 %, respectively.
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, the lowest proportion was
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social
housing at 6 % and 2 %, respectively. As regards the second greatest
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was social renting in both years at 23 % and 17 %, respectively. In terms of private renting, it was the third rank ratio from above, and it remained steady in two years at 11 %.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • owned
  • rented
  • housing
  • show
  • decreased
  • increased
  • shift
  • trend
  • years
  • common
  • prices
  • economic
  • changes
  • people
  • homes
  • compared
  • specific
  • features
  • main
  • information
  • around
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