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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours

Dear
Neighbor
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Neighbour
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, I hope you are doing well
,
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.
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 I am sorry
,
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 because
i
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I
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has coursed
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was disturbed
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 by the
noisy
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noise
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 from a
Party
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a
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last
Linking Words
 night. Yesterday it my graduation, so it
quite
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was quite
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 noisy. I
organize
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organised
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 a
party
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 in my House with Family and Friends.
My making
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Making
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 plans
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, it
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it
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it's
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 Meat grill, drink Beer and take Photos in
oder
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order
 to beautiful Memory. I think
,
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 it is a great way to
fun
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have fun
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 and
cosy
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be cosy
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. A
Party
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 is happy, so we organization Karaoke and dance. It takes me about 2 hours, so
it
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it's
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 quite noisy. I am sorry, because
i
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I
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has
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have
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affect
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affected
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for
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apply
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your quiet. I promise in the Future,
i
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I
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 will pay attention to the sound
,
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 when
i
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I
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organize
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organise
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 a
Party
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 in my House. I hope
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 that we are still happy. Wish best wishes! Ms Van Anh.

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language improvement
Use simple and clear words. Fix grammar and miss‑spelled words to make your message easier to read.
structure improvement
Open with a friendly greeting and end with a clear sign‑off to show your respect.
coherence improvement
Try to put one main idea in each sentence and use shorter lines. Break long notes into small parts.
tone strength
The letter keeps a polite tone for neighbours.
content strength
The writer shows a real apology and gives a reason for the noise.
content strength
The letter says it will be quieter in the future and asks for calm.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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