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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows
estimated
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the estimated
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 Capacity of
Oil
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Production
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 for several
middle east
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Middle East
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 countries between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, Saudi Arabia had the biggest
oil
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production
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 amongst other countries during the
period
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,
while
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 Qatar accounted
the
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for the
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 least
oil
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pruduction
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production
 during the
period
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.
On the other hand
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, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and
UAE
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the UAE
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 experienced similar
production
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 from 1990 to 2010. On the one hand, Saudi Arabia was the biggest
oil
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 producer in
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the middle
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middle east
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Middle East
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 by more than 8
Millions
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million
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Barrel
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barrels
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 in 1990. Evidently, their
production
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 continued to increase in 2000, and surged to almost 15
Millions
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million
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barrel
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barrels
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.
On the other hand
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,
oil
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production
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 in Qatar remained
same
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the same
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 for almost 20 years, with some fluctuations.
in
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In
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 1990, Qatar
only
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apply
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produced less than 1
millions barrel
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million barrels
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, and it increased in 2000.
However
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, the
production
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 experienced
downward
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a downward
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 trend
at the end
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 of the
period
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. Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, and UAE experienced an upward trend and have
similar
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a similar
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 pattern,
eventhough
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even though
 their
production
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 was not as high as Saudi Arabia. These countries boosted their productivity
for
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apply
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almost twice in 2 decades.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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