The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures illustrate the comparison of the same
museum
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and its surrounding areas, which
was
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were
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small in size in 1990 and 2010. The diagrams show that the position of the entrance remained the same in both maps, but the path width is a little bit decreased in the 2010 picture of the
museum
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. Meanwhile, the presence of trees in the main garden
is
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has
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not changed in the
museum
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; that garden is located
at the end
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of the
museum
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. As the information is gathered from both museums, the car park area
got
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was
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enhanced in 2010 after a little bit of renovation, which is present on the right side along the main route;
in contrast
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, before that, the area was distributed between car parking and a second small garden of the
museum
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in 1990. The diagrams demonstrate that the cottage area in the old
museum
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transformed
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was transformed
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into a cafe in 2010. Meanwhile, to enter the staff room and shops, the entrance is located on the left side along the path after the cafe and cottage room in both maps, respectively.
Overall
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, there are not so many changes in the
museum
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after the renovation.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • museum
  • surroundings
  • 1990
  • 2010
  • was
  • were
  • became
  • increased
  • decreased
  • added
  • built
  • extended
  • expanded
  • new
  • old
  • entrance
  • gate
  • car park
  • parking
  • path
  • pathway
  • road
  • garden
  • trees
  • plants
  • fence
  • sign
  • signs
  • board
  • information board
  • cafe
  • shop
  • toilet
  • facilities
  • access
  • ramp
  • steps
  • open space
  • area
  • layout
  • location
  • now
  • then
  • more
  • less
  • compared with
  • while
  • whereas
  • as a result
  • overall
  • in general
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