Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending colledge or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often stated that distance-learning programmes are not

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as

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physical

classes

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. I agree with

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view because

people

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can expand their

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network

in the classrooms and they typically pay more attention to lessons,

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flexibility and advancement in technology for virtual learning should

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be taken into account. There is some truth in the argument that online

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learning

has some advantages. These

classes

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usually are

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recorded, so pupils have

an

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easy access to

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this

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materials.

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, if they were absent, they would watch the recorded

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class

.

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, during

COVID-19

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pandemic, most universities and

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had to use online platforms to hold their

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.

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,

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should

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adapt

to

technology

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advancement

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, and online learning is part of

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progress. It is undeniable that in the near future online courses will replace physical courses

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the fast Internet networks

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and computers.

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, I believed that

people

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usually consider universities and

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colleges

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as a

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environment to make new friends. They want to meet new

people

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and develop their social skills because these skills are essential in the job market. To illustrate,

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is widely believed that

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with higher levels of communication can find

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a job

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easily.

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, pupils pay more attention in physical

classes

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and can learn better. They can

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interact

with teachers through eye contact.

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,

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feel connected to

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.

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,

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partly true that online learning has some benefits, including flexibility, time management, and advancement in technology, I would argue that

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market needs decent social skills and depth of learning

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are accessible through attendance in physical

classes

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.