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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the
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amount
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 of
waste
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 produced by three different companies (A,
B
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, and
C
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) between 200 and 2015, measured
with
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in
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
while
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 the amount of
waste
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 in both
company
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 A and
B
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 decreased dramatically, there was a significant rise in
company
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C
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. To start with,
company
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C
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, the
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amount
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 of
waste
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 rose gradually from around 4
tonnes
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 to approximately 6
tonnes
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 in 2005, peaking at about 10
tonnes
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 by 2015.
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,
company
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 A showed the largest figure at 12
tonnes
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 before a slight dip in 2005. There was
then
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 a downward trend in the figure, reaching just under 9
tonnes
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 in 2015.
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,
company
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B
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 stood at nearly 9
tonnes
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 in 2000, and
then
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 soared by 10
tonnes
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 in 2005. After 2005,
this
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 amount dropped sharply to almost 3
tonnes
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 in 2015. The lowest amount of
waste
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 in that year. Notably,
company
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C
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overtaking
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is overtaking
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 A and
B
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 in
waste
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 output.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, b, c, tonnes, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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