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Sone believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion?

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 individuals that learners ought
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 in their early school days
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however
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, others believe it is better to teach
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According to
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 me, it will be beneficial for them to learn early, which helps them to save
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any type of
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students
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 as much
as
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time
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 by the help of early sessions. If learners will utilise a considerable amount of
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 for learning any specific
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 to focus on other subjects like
mathmatics
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mathematics
, science and history, which is
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 important.
So
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 learners should start learning all languages from
beginning
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the beginning
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 is essential.
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, In the United States of America,
students
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 perform well in examinations. If juveniles
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start
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learning
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any particular
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primary and secondary
school
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school,
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then
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an
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 waste of
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basic of each communication skill needs to be clear as soon as possible, which leads to
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 them perfect
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, in India, a school trip has been organised by
principal
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the principal
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 to go abroad
and
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, and
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 an interview session was held to get to know about the
students
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 who can speak English
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fluent
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 way
,
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 most of them
were making
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 a lot of
germmatical
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grammatical
 errors. So,
students
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 got rejected at the
time
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. In conclusion, even though some people think the
students
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 should learn
language
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 later, teaching them about all the
basic
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 early will
proved
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 beneficial for them. From my point of view,
students
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precious
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international interviews without any difficulty.

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grammar
Use short, plain sentences. Fix grammar in each line.
organization
Plan your essay: intro, body with one idea per paragraph, and a short conclusion that states your view.
structure
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea at the start (topic sentence).
cohesion
Link ideas well with simple words such as but, however, also, first, next, then.
content
Use better, real examples and explain how they show your point.
content
The essay tries to show both sides and gives an opinion.
content
Examples from other places are used to back points.
structure
There is a conclusion that states the view.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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