The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The given line graph illustrates the number of
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that three kinds of fast food are served in Australia over a period of 25 years, commencing from 1975.
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there was a decrease in the consumption of pizza and hamburgers, the opposite trend could be seen for fish and chips. At the beginning of the period, fish and chips, which were served 100
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, were the popular fast food among others.
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, it decreased gradually to finish at just below 40, apart from a brief rise from 1980 to 1985. In sharp contrast to
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the consumption of pizza and hamburgers was
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a minor significance around 10
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a year, there was a dramatic rise for both and exceeded that of fish and chips in 1985, with
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the number of around 70
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for hamburgers and in 1990 at the number of well over 60 for other pizza.
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both continued to go up to level off at 100 and well over 80, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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