Your city library is closing for revonation for three months 1 Write a short message to your classmate about how you feel and what you will do inside ( aboute 50 wods)

Dean Behruz, Did you hear our city library is
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for dosing? I am very
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because
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apply
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There
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are
My
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favourete
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favourite
books only in
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the library
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. In my
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opposes
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services
during the
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closure
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the
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library
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losing
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customers
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read
. Keep in touch. Rasuljon.

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task response
To improve task response, state a clear feeling and give one simple plan of action for the library break.
coherence cohesion
To make order in your writing, put the idea in a simple order: greeting, feel, plan, closing.
tone
The note has a greeting and a closing.
content
It shows you care about books and the library.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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