The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year.

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, Coal is the highest source of energy in all

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remains the least. 20

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ago, Coal, Nuclear and Gas were mostly used as the generators of power. With 41,4%, 19,6% and 22.3% respectively. In the previous

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, the three sources continued dominating. Coal (32.7%) and gas (with 21.7%) generation decreased in

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more than 5% and remained at 26.4%. Oil (2.1%) and Hydro pumped storage (3.1%) were the least generated 20

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, Oil generation increased (to 4.0%)

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the latter reduced (2.2%) . Hydro natural flow started at 8.7% and decreased to 7.9%

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. Other renewables saw an increase in generation from 2.8% in the past 2 decades to 5.1 in the previous

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The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year.

Some people think that the best way to resolve environmental problems is to increase fuel and vehicles’ prices. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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