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Band 6.5

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

The given pie charts explain
spread
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the spread
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 of the
forest
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land
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 in five varied continents and the quantity of
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timbre
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timber
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,
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apply
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 found in these areas.
Overall
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, Africa has
largest
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the largest
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land
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 under
forest
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, but the production of
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timbre
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timber
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 is the poorest in
this
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 region
with
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, with
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 North
America
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 giving the best amount of wood.
On the other hand
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, Asia has most of its
land
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 deprived of
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forest
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forests
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. In regards to the first pie chart, Africa has
most
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the most
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 of the
forest
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 covered in these five regions
owning
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, owning
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 about 27% of the total
land
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with
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, with
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 North
America
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 claiming about a quarter of
this
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forest
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. Asia accounts
to
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for
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 only 16% of
whole
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the whole
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forestral
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forested
land
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Europe
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. Europe
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 and South
America
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 own 16% and 18% respectively.
According to
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 the second pie chart, North
America
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 gives around 30% of the
timbre
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 in these places
making
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, making
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 the most of
this
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 wood,
whereas
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,
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apply
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 Africa, even though
has
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it has
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 most of the
forest
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land
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, contributes as little as 9% for
timbre
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 making.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, land, timbre, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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