The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams compare the current layout of an industrial area in Norbiton city with its proposed development. Several significant developments are proposed.

such

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as new roadways, shops, playground, school, medical centre and

also

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huge

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a huge

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bridge across the river, the most

noticable

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noticeable

change was

removal

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the removal

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of factories

but

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, but

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apply

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this

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was offset by the fact that factories were

transformated

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transformed

into houses. Comparing the two maps, the easternmost factory will be replaced by a school.

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, two factories situated in the south-eastern part of the map will be replaced with a large housing centre, and a playground will be located opposite it.

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, farmland is going to be relocated to the north-eastern part of the site.

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changes include the construction of new roadways and new facilities,

as well as

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brand-new

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a brand-new

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road through the river and huge housing by the end.

However

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, there

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are

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also

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some relocations of houses and building markets beside the road.

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Dec 5, 2025

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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