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Internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Some people think all information reliable on the internet. Rest think otherwise. What is your opinion?

İt is often argued that
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the network
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 is a good reference for
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data
 and has
started
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opened
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 up
chances
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opportunities
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 for all humans to
educated
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be educated
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 all around the
global
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globe
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.Some
citizen
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citizens
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 believe all
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trustable
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is trustworthy
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 on the Cloud .Rest asserted that
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on
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, on
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 the other hand.I think that it isn’t true
for taking
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to take
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 knowledge from
internet.İn
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the internet.İn
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this
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essay
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essay,
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with
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apply
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the reasons
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why ı think my argument is true.
Firstly
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, the way I see it
when
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, when
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 we learn
informaiton
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information
 from
via
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technological roads,we can’t be sure about
it how reliable
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how reliable it
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.
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Furthermore
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, if we
learnsome
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learn some
lessons
subject
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apply
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in
mat
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math
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 hor physics from
Ai
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AI
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 or some kind of
education
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educational
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 resource like
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that,
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 it can
cause
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lead
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 to
failed
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failure
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 on our exam.
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,in
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India
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india
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india,
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 one student tried to pass the exam with
ai
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AI
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but
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 he
can’t
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managed
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it
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to pass because the source
artifical inteligence
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artificial intelligence
 looked was some fake
infos
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information
.We can’t be
absolute
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absolutely
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 sure about information quality in
tecnhology
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technology
.
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,as far as I’m concerned is using somebody Works without paying any Money.İt means that you stoled somebodies work without paying any Money
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. actualy
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Actually
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actualy,
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 it is like robbing.In
additon
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addition
 to
this
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 internet
does’t
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doesn’t
 provide
quality
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a quality
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 system for
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the guaranteed
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guaranteed
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guarantee
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 of copyright.İt creates huge ethical
lapse
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lapses
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,and it causes
a
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poverty in
the
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writers because these document are their way to earn revenue.For ınstance,in
China
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China,
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 people
using
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use
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 so much internet for
datas
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data
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; eventualy
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eventually
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eventualy,
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 authors started to
hungry
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go on hunger
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 strike.İt is not just about getting
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clever
clevered
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clevered,
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 we should
also
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 think ethical way
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result
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 the advanced Technologies helping to learning
is
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are
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unefficient
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inefficient

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structure
Plan first: write a clear start that says what you will talk about, then three simple ideas with a small point of support, and finish with a short clear end.
content
There is an idea on the topic and a view point.
form
The essay has a basic form with three parts: intro, body, and ending.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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