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Writing Samples
Band 3

A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the present world, it is said that
mathematic
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ability
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 is not as profound in
workplace
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the workplace
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 as it used to be. Personally, I disagree that arithmetic understanding is a waste in today's
job
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 market, which
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centered
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centred
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 around systemic thinking and helps your
ability
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 to be more quantifiable. I will explain some of the reasons in
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Firstly
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, arithmetic
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 is a
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 exact field, which is crucial in terms of performance tracking.
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, a lot of
job
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 posting requires you to have
math
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a math
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 test,
although
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 the
job
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 does not
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in
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the
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a
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 daily
.
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basis.
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, it makes it clear that
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job
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jobs
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 still rely upon
exatitude
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the exaltation
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 of mathematical
ability
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Moreover
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, mathematical
ability
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 is linked to how someone can think systematically when working
around
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with numbers.
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, to solve a mathematical
problem
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you
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 need to analyse the variables included in the equation, which mimics how one faces
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problem
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a problem
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 in
workplace
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the workplace
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. By understanding what variables are involved in the
problem
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, one can see the issue more clearly.
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why
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apply
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, mathematical thinking helps people to scrutinise the
problem
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 at hand In summary,
arithmatical
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arithmetical
ability
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 is still
crucial
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a crucial
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 aspect in
workplace
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the workplace
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, even in
modern
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the modern
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 world where calculations are handled by
machine
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machines
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.
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,
it is clear that
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 the idea of mathematical
ability
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 being unimportant cannot be supported.

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planning
Build a clear plan before writing. Start with a short statement of your view, then give two or three reasons, each with a simple example.
coherence
Develop each point with one clear example. Link ideas with 'first', 'also', 'however', 'therefore' to show order.
grammar
Check spelling and word form errors that make meaning hard to grasp, like 'arithmetic' and 'exatitude'.
lexical
Keep simple and precise language. Use common words to explain your idea clearly.
structure
Write a short conclusion that restates your view and sums up the reasons.
stance
Clear stance on the topic.
coherence
Good use of connecting words (Firstly, Moreover, In summary).
content
Some relevant ideas about the link between math and problem solving.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • omnipresence
  • automation
  • advanced mathematics
  • critical thinking
  • digitalization
  • software tools
  • mathematical literacy
  • personal finance management
  • logical reasoning
  • data analysis
  • mathematical competence
  • complex calculations
  • in-depth
  • broader job market
  • specific fields
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