The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps provide key information about how the Islip
town
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centre is now and before planning and developing.
Overall
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, it is clear from the map that Islip
Town
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witnessed a remarkable development over a period. Most noticeably, the increases in accommodation, the elimination of
shops
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, and the introduction of various amenities.
According to
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what the map shows in the present, they are merging
shops
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to make two
shops
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in the whole
town
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. The most impressive change is the relocation of the main road and putting it in the middle of the
town
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. The school, park and residential areas remain unchanged during the period. In terms of Islip
town
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with planning and development, it was a road, a Dual carriageway, surrounded by
shops
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, housing, and a park. There was a bus station to move individuals to other regions and a car park to meet the residents’ demand for parking.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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