The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

the
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table
illustrate
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illustrates
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the number of
students
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who graduate
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graduate
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and
postgraduate
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pursued postgraduate
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in
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studies in
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UK
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the UK
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who
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were not
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involve
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full time
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full-time
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work after college in 2008.
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further
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study
show
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shows
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the highest number of
students
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in both
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tables
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, for
graduates
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graduate
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students
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was 29,665
and
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for
postgraduates
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postgraduate
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students
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was 2,725.
the
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loest
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lowest
work for postgraduates was voluntary
work
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work,
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it was 345, and it is
also
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loast
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lowest
number in
graduates
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graduate
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studets
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students
it
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was 3,500

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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