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The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The map provides information on the current condition and future development plan of an office building.
Overall
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, there are some improvements and alterations in some parts of the building. Meanwhile, some other parts remain the same after the construction.
To begin
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 with, there are two main entrances to the building at present—one located on the west side, another located in the southeast
corner
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. After improvements, the south
corner
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 entrance will move to the south, between two office rooms.
Secondly
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, Grass areas on the west and east sides of the building will be reconstructed into an Outdoor Seating
area
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, a Meeting
area
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, and a Coffee
Area
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. On the north side, the Kitchen and Canteen will be reconstructed into Office rooms.
Furthermore
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, a toilet room at the
corner
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 of the store room will be moved to the north-east
corner
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, near the coffee
Area
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corner, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
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