The maps below shows the changes in the town called Bridgetown between 1700 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagrams illustrate the changes that occurred in Bridgetown over a period of 1700. Map A depicts the area in 1700,

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Map B shows the same region at a later date, particularly in 2000.

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, there had been several modifications, the most noticeable being the school, railway , highway and bypass.

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with the 1700s, there was a massive castle on the northeast side of the territory, which was reconstructed and used as a school.

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, near the Castle, there was a wooden area and Market place, which remained without adjustment. But the marketplace doubled in size in 2000. When it comes to the other developments, there was a crossroad in the middle of the graph, running from the northwest to southeast. In 2000, to shorten

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long roadway in order to go around, a bypass was introduced on two sides of the road.

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bypass was above the River in the southeast part, which runs from the southwest to the northeast side of the outline in both years. And on the other side, in the north-west, a railway was established. It was

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above the river, from North to East. A bridge which was located in the centre of

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artery and farmland stayed with any developments in 2000.

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Young adults are now choosing to wait until later in life, often until they are in their 30s, to settle down and get married. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some pople believe that children should be taught academic subject at school, while other think that teaching pratical skills is more important. discuss both view and give your own opinion.