The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets (for last year and 6 years ago)

The given chart provides information on the 10 best US food market exports that was

last

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year and 6

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ago.

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, the dominant was Canada and the lowest was Hong Kong. By the bar chart , in every country that was Canada, Mexico, the European Union, Japan, China and other countries, increased slightly in 5 5-year period. The dominant Canada was 9.3 6

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old and experienced an increase to 13.2

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year. The biggest increase was in the Rest of the world, it was 6.3 6

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ago and increased slightly to 11.0

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year. The smallest exported countries , Hong Kong and Australia, were the same with 0.3 6

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ago,

then

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they increased marginally to 0.8 and 1.0 respectively , and other countries like Mexico, the European Union, Japan and others witnessed the increase, too.

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Dec 12, 2025

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets (for last year and 6 years ago)

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to stay in the same job for same company, but other prefer to change job frequently. You should use specific reason to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as, Sahara desert or the Antarcatic What are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.