The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The map chart gives information about a store that sells books in the year 2000 and

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this

Correct determiner usage

the

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current time.

Overall

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, we can see that some new rooms have been added, and

also

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, we can notice that the positions of several places have not changed.

According to

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the data shown,

it is clear that

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the fiction category has been split into different genres,

such

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as art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction. where it was, in the past, covering a huge zone of the shop. As for the nonfiction class, it has been shifted into another area, and a cafe has been installed

instead

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, and near

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it,

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we can see three seating tables replacing the different sections mentioned above.

In contrast

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, for the brand-new changes, some chambers did not change, which were the travel section and, close to it, the latest volumes, and the service desk stayed in its place facing the entrance since the beginning and until nowadays.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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