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Band 1

Learning abaut the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people who live in the present do not need to learn about the past
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 it has no value in the
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modern
 world.
from
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 my perspective, I strongly agree that
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searching
 about the past is useless. On the one hand, many people argue that technology
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has developed
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 rapidly
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resent
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 years and the new generations need to adapt
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to
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 these
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improvements
. To illustrate, when
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young adults
 learn about the history or the
past
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past,
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 they might learn about
informations
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information
 that
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 no
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longer improtant
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improtant
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important
 nowadays.
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, teaching children about past
event
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events
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 like wars or
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discovering
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inventions
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pecess
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apply
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will not help them after
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finishing
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 school and
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looking
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 for
job
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a job
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content
Plan your essay. Say your view at the start. Then give two or three main reasons.
structure
Make a small intro and a short ending. The end should rest the start idea.
language
Use simple words. Keep one idea per line. Avoid hard or long words.
grammar
Check your spellings and form. Fix mistakes in words like past,present and other common errors.
example
Add clear examples from life or from events. This helps make your point.
idea
The piece shows a clear view.
cohesion
Some links between ideas are used.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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