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The table shows the amount of waste production in six countries in three different years.

The given table chart represents the data regarding the
amount
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 of
waste
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 production in
different six
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six different
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 nations
in
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over
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three
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a
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consecutive years
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three-year
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 time span.
Overall
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,
In
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in
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 2000,the highest
amount
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 of
waste
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 was produced
and
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, and
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United
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the United
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states
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States
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 was
the
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a
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 significant contributor in all three years. In 1980, Korea did not
excreate
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produce
 anything in form of
waste
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, wereas
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wereas
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whereas
US's
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the US's
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 debris was in
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an imense
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imense
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immense
amount
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.
In Addition
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, Japan was
second
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the second
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 most
waste
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emitter
emmiter
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emmiter,
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 followed by Poland, Portugal and Ireland.
In contrast
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 to the above, some fluctations in
waste
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 production can be seen in the year 1990. Ireland did not
produced
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produce
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 any
waste
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in
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apply
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this
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 year
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while
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, while
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 other nations followed the same trend as
like
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in
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 1980.
Moreover
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, the US was again
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a high
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high volume
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high-volume
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 producer with a significant
amount
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 which was keep on increasing over time. In conclusion, by comparing all the
territories
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territories,
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 it can be
conclude
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concluded
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 that the pinnacle garbage patron was
US
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the US
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 over the thirty
year
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years
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 of time
but
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apply
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,
the
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but the
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 other kingdoms
also
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alturists
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attract
the
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apply
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waste
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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