Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economics around the world.However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and
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a significant
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to economics around the world. Not only to the economics it can
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the local
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and the
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environment
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there is an argument that
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tourism
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can cause
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harm to
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local
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and
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the enviroment
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environment
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people
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and negative
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impacts
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situation. As
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know,
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many
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for
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the enviroment
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environment
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the economics
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segment,
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give
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an
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to
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local
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as,
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can open a local culture or
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custom
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. It can
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people
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an income and make
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local culture more global or famous.
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not only
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make
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an
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benefit to
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who try the experience. If they like the
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they will share the
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to
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other
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choice
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the
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,
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also can
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make
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a negative
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local
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or
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the native
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population.
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a good attitude, they
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make
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problems.
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damage to local facilities, or they can share or teach
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people
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and native bad habits or bad things. Because of that, it can
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a
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boomerang effect
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local
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locally
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. If many tourist like
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come to their place. It can make their custom,
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, and
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environment
in danger.
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, there are
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benefits
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and negative
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impact
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for
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situation. In my point of view, there are more
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impact
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or
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situoation
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situation
. Because of
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to disagree with
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statement or
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. In my point of view, there are more
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impact
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or
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than negative for
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situoation
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situation
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural commodification
  • environmental degradation
  • local economies
  • cultural exchange
  • sustainable tourism
  • commercialization
  • authenticity
  • destination overpopulation
  • tourist expectations
  • economic benefits
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