The graph below show the number of hours spent on social media per day from 2010to 2016 as well as the reasons why they used them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

The bar chart illustrates information about how many hours spent on platforms daily between 2010 to 2016

as well as

Linking Words

diverce reason why they used them in their

businesses

Use synonyms

Overall

Linking Words

, 2016 shows the largest percentage over the

peroid

Correct your spelling

period

while

Linking Words

2015 seems to be the smallest in almost all the reasons.

In addition

Linking Words

, 2013 and 2014 give a similar

percent

Replace the word

percentage

show examples

Change preposition

for

show examples

all

businesses

Use synonyms

. Over the period

the

Punctuation problem

, the

show examples

percentage

incereased

Correct your spelling

increased

, after a decline in 2015. In small

businesses

Use synonyms

it can be seen that figurs about 27%, 30%, 33% and 30% in the years 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 respectivly, before climbing up in 2016 to below 50%.

Moreover

Linking Words

, in medium

businesses

Use synonyms

it was alike small

businesses

Use synonyms

expect

Use the right word

except

show examples

in 2013 and 2014 it was larger

about

Change preposition

by about

show examples

50%. Looking at Large

businesses

Use synonyms

, all the

figurs

Correct your spelling

figures

were bottom 80%, allness in 2015

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

was above 50%.

تكفى

Dec 17, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words businesses with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

142 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free times. This can benefit teenagers and benefit the community as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Some argue that encouraging young learners to participate in voluntary efforts in their local areas after school or during holidays can benefit both parties. Personally, I completely agree with this assertion.
6
band
Five months ago, you started renting an apartment on a six-month agreement. You now wish to stay in the apartment for longer than the six months you originally agreed with the owner. Write a letter to the owner of your apartment. In your letter say how long you now want to rent the apartment for explain why your plans have changed tell the owner about a problem in the apartment
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you regarding the apartment that I rented from you. We have agreed upon 6 months. Now that we are in the 4th month I want to let you know that I would like to expand the agreement period for another 3 months. My family and I were impressed by the apartment so we could not go on and change for another place. Although I told you once we agreed that I would be here for 6 months only, however, turns out my job is taking much longer to finish, therefore I have to stay. Despite the impression we took by the apartment, yet, there is one thing that is bothering us very often, which is, neighbours loud noises. I know that it is a bit hard to control, yet, I believe you can notice them, given that I have told them before but they have not listened to me. Thanks for your understanding and let me know as soon as possible.
8
band
People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of inconsiderate people towards the environment. While they are aware of the importance of preserving the environment, they pay less attention to this issue. In this essay, I will first examine the reasons for being inconsiderate towards the environment and then present alternatives to this issue.
6.5
band
Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore others subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extend do you agree or disagree
It is thought by some people that subjects that are considered not important to children should be cut out from their curriculum and schools need to teach only subjects that will benefit their future careers. From my point of view, I slightly disagree with this aspect and reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching my conclusion.
7
band
over population of urban areas has lead to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals tackle these problems.
More and more issues are occurring in cities due to overpopulation. One of the major problems faced by people living in urban areas is traffic jams which are mainly caused by the significant increase in the number of cars on the city roads and a viable solution to tackle this is to increase the frequency of public transport. This essay will discuss my viewpoint in detail with relevant examples.

The graph below show the number of hours spent on social media per day from 2010to 2016 as well as the reasons why they used them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free times. This can benefit teenagers and benefit the community as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore others subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extend do you agree or disagree

over population of urban areas has lead to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals tackle these problems.