The graph below show the number of hours spent on social media per day from 2010to 2016 as well as the reasons why they used them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

The bar chart illustrates information about how many hours spent on platforms daily between 2010 to 2016
as well as
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diverce reason why they used them in their
businesses
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Overall
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, 2016 shows the largest percentage over the
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period
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while
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2015 seems to be the smallest in almost all the reasons.
In addition
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, 2013 and 2014 give a similar
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percentage
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on
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for
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all
businesses
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. Over the period
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, the
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percentage
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increased
, after a decline in 2015. In small
businesses
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it can be seen that figurs about 27%, 30%, 33% and 30% in the years 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 respectivly, before climbing up in 2016 to below 50%.
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, in medium
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it was alike small
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,
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except
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in 2013 and 2014 it was larger
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by about
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50%. Looking at Large
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, all the
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figures
were bottom 80%, allness in 2015
it
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apply
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was above 50%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words businesses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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