The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart provides key information about the stages involved in the production of coffee.

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, it is clear from the diagram that the coffee-making process is a complex, multi-stage procedure starting from picking and ending with packing into jars.

In addition

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, the initial steps focus on picking and drying,

whereas

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the latter stages involve a series of

further

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processes.

According to

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what is shown, the first step includes picking coffee

beans

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have been

pick it

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, after which they are dried.

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the

beans

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undergo

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cool rapidly after roasting. The

beans

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are followed by mechanical grinding using a special machine. In terms of

further

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processing, the ground

beans

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are

then

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soaked , which consists of mixing with hot water

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Subsequently

subsequently

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, strain the mixture .

After

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this

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, following the soaking phase, the mixture is frozen and ground , and dried in a vacuum.

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, the end products are packed into jars

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beans with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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