The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the
road
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layout of a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, access to the hospital was significantly modernised during
this
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period, with the addition of a bus station, improved parking facilities, and two new roundabouts. On the northern side, the hospital building remained surrounded by the Ring
Road
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. Next to it, a new public car park was introduced, separated from the original mixed car park that had previously been located to the south of the building.
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, a roundabout was constructed at the intersection of the Ring
Road
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and Hospital
Road
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. In comparison, the southern side underwent more extensive redevelopment. A second roundabout was built at the other end of Hospital
Road
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.
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, the six bus stops along Hospital
Road
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were removed and replaced by a new bus station to the west, linking the two roundabouts.
Finally
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, the original car park was retained exclusively for staff use in 2010.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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