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Some people believe that working from home increases productivity, while others think that it reduces efficiency and discipline. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
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 argue that working from
home
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 increases efficiency,
while
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 others believe that it reduces staying consistent and controlled. In my opinion, the former is more advantageous than the latter in terms of
self-dependent
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self-dependence
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 and
freedom
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 On the one hand, working from
home
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 increases
self-dependent
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self-dependence
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 and
freedom
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.
Consequently
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, working from
home
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nourishes
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encourages
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people
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 to be
self reliable
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self-reliant
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.
For instance
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, research at Flinders University says among 100
student
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students
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 60% of the
student
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students
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 were engaged in working from
home
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.
Besides
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 improving
self dependence
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self-dependence
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,
Freedom
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 is one of the key major working from
home
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. Working from their
house
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 influences
people
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 to be free in
work
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their work
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.
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, the
people
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 of Chattogram were engaged in various physical works, but
nowadays
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people
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 are involved in working from
home
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.
On the other hand
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, working from
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house
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home
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 may cause multiple disadvantages like work-life balance & professional environment.
Home
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 labour causes
lack
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a lack
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 of Communication with others is the main impact on
work life
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work-life
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balance. Specifically, research at Adelaide
university
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University
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 says, among 80% students 50% of them were engaged in working from
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house
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home
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.
Moreover
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,
professional
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a professional
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 environment is very beneficial for working experience. In conclusion, working from
home
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 nourishes
people
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 to be
Self dependent
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self-dependent
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 and
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freedom
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free
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,
whereas
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 working from
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house
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home
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 can
also
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causes
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cause
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lack
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a lack
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 of
self-life-balance
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self-life balance
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 and
professional
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a professional
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 environment.

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planning
Plan in four parts: intro, view 1, view 2, final opinion. Say your view clearly at the end.
language
Use easy and correct words. Check small mistakes in grammar before you write.
content
Give one clear example for each view. Do not copy from one place. Check facts if you use them.
structure
Make the ending clear and tie it to what you said in the intro.
task response
The essay shows the idea of both sides and a choice.
coherence
There are linking words like On the one hand and In conclusion to show roll of ideas.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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