You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter: &Describe the problem with the equipment. &Explain how this problem is affecting your work. &Say what you want the shop or company to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the problem with my

laptop

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, which I recently purchased from your store on the 11th of January, 2026. Please allow me to explain.

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with, the model of

this

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laptop

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is Dell, LZ275. It was working perfectly fine;

however

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, I recently noticed that the display started flickering and turning to a black screen.

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is causing

such

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a great inconvenience because I am unable to use my

laptop

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for my work, as I have to complete imperative tasks. I would request you to check and repair the

laptop

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display

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it is still under warranty.

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, please replace

this

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model with a new one and let me know if I have to pay any additional charges.

This

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matter requires urgent attention as it is preventing me from

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apply

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doing my job. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Jeevitha S

jeeanay

Jan 11, 2026

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organization

Make the letter in three parts: the problem, how it hurts work, and what you want them to do. Put each part in its own paragraph.

content

Add exact facts like date of buy and order number and model name. This helps fix the issue fast.

style

Some lines are long. Use short lines to show your point.

tone

Keep a calm and polite tone. You did well with 'Dear Sir/Madam' and 'Yours sincerely'.

content

The goal is clear in the first lines. You say what you want.

tone

The tone is polite and kind at the start and end.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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