The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works.

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different
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and its working mechanism. The stimulus sent from the
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's
cell
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body
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travel
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along its length to reach the terminal buttons
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taken up by the next
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in contact with
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dendrites
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The
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biggest
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the
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body, known as 'soma'. Soma
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receives
the signals from the hair-like structure protruding from its outer surface, called the 'dendrites'. The impulse is
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passed onto the terminal buttons through an elongated channel consisting of an axon. An axon has two main purposes
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firstly
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, to pass the signal to muscles, glands or other neurons and
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secondly,
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to do
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as quickly as possible.
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speed is obtained from the areas of enclosed compartments made of myelin sheath. The action potential
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is an electrical signal generated
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from the soma, jumps between these compartments,
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skipping half of the length of the axons, before reaching
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buttons.
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recieved
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received
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the next
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neuron
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or the
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cell
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cells
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of other organs. In
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the electrical impulses
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travel along different parts of a brain
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to communicate with the adjacent
cell
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body.

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