The line graph shows the percentage of spending in a European country from 1960 to 2000.

The line chart illustrates the rate of money spent for several
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, namely food, leisure, clothing, transport, and fuel, in one European nation between 1960 and 2000.
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, every category showed a downward trend,
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transportation accounted for an upward movement over time. In 1960, the percentage of spending for food began with approximately 34%,
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it decreased steadily over the years and reached below 15% in 2000.
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, the spending on leisure started with nearly 20% in 1960, after which it fell gradually and hit a low point at around 11%
at the end
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of the period.
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, the shares for clothing and fuel experienced similarity.
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, at the beginning, they started with 10% and about 6% respectively.
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figure edged down continually over the period and hit the lowest point at 5% and around 3% each.
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, the spending for transport began with roughly 9% in 1960 and rose consistently to almost 15% by 2000.

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