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The line graph below show the number of car produced in three different countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releveant

The chart illustrates the number of
cars
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 produced in three nations, namely Argentina,
Australia
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, and Thailand, over the period between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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, the numbers in
Australia
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 and Thailand experienced an upward trend,
whereas
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 Argentina showed a downward pattern. By the end of the period,
Australia
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 had produced the highest number of
cars
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 among the three. The number produced in Thailand stood at 161 units in the first year, which was followed by a consistent increase over the years and reached a peak
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of 999 items by 2009.
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, the figure on
cars
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 produced in
Australia
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 began at 300
cars
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 in 2003, and
thereafter
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 it rose moderately to 400 just two years later.
This
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 rate soared significantly to 1,119
cars
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at the end
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 of the period.
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, Argentina produced 400 units at the beginning.
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 was followed by a steady decrease to 200 items in 2005 and remained declining to 100
cars
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 by 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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