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Writing Samples
Band 4

Dear member, I am writing to inform you that the city library will be closed for two weeks starting from next Monday. The reason is that we are carrying out maintenance work and updating the digital catalogue system.

Hey Sara, Hope you're doing well
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 Did you see the message from the library? It will close for two weeks. I'm so sad
but
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 other
sides
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hand
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I'm
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, I'm
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 happy as the library will
repair
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be repaired
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 and
improve
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improved
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its
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 quality. It is
old
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an old
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build
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building
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 and its equipment too. Write to me Take care, Sevara

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structure
Plan with a clear opening, body, and finish.
grammar
Use simple, full sentences and fix basic grammar mistakes.
content
Add a few details to support each idea you want to share.
tone
Keep a warm, friendly tone when you write to a friend.
tone
The message is easy to read and friendly.
content
It shows clear purpose to tell about the library closure.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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