More and more international companies are investing and locating their business in foreign country. What problems will local communities face with and what can be done ?

There is an ongoing debate that the majority of corporates are prioritising their investments and businesses in other
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their profits.
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Finish the plan and the rest of the essay. Do not leave the idea half done.
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Use a clear order. Start with the problem, then give a solution. Each part should have its own paragraph.
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Link ideas with plain words. Use 'first', 'then', 'also', 'but', 'and', 'finally'.
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Check spelling and grammar. For example, 'countries' not 'counties'.
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You state the topic and say you will discuss problems and fixes.
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Your plan shows you aim to give both sides and a way to fix.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Foreign direct investment
  • Globalization
  • International corporations
  • Local economy
  • Job creation
  • Resource allocation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Infrastructure development
  • Environmental conservation
  • Exploitation
  • Transparency
  • Accountability
  • Regulations
  • Fair competition
  • Cultural exchange
  • Ethical business practices
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