The line graph shows male and female gym membership over a thirty-year period. The vertical axis represents the number of members in units of 1000. The horizontal axis represents the period from 1980 to 2010

The graph illustrates the percentage of
membership
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among males and females between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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, male
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increased significantly over the period, particularly after 1995,
whereas
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female
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rose more gradually and remained comparatively lower throughout most of the years. At the beginning of the period, male
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was relatively low and remained stable until 1990. From that point onwards, it began to rise, with a particularly sharp increase after 1995.
This
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upward trend continued until 2005, when male
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reached its highest level.
In contrast
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, female
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showed a slow but steady increase over time. In 1990, the percentages for males and females were similar.
Although
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female
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peaked in 1995, it did not experience the same rapid growth as that of males. After 2000, the gap between the two groups widened, with male
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increasing more noticeably
while
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the female figure remained lower.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words membership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Vertical axis
  • Horizontal axis
  • Gym membership
  • Male and female
  • Trends
  • Increase / Decrease
  • Peak / Drop
  • Comparison
  • Equality / Inequality
  • Period / Time-frame
  • Cultural shifts
  • Health awareness
  • Economic factors
  • Target market
  • Marketing strategies
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